An experiment of delivery. Also, because of my listening to and attempting to emulate Nicis and TGSM I was going through a time when I considered the rhyme more important than connecting the message, which is why I'm being a lyrical miracle most of the time for this 24 bars. This is also notable as the first time I dipped into darker topic matter. I don't do that often. ORIGINAL DESCRIPTION: Lyrics: A lost cause crossed paths with vengeance Indifference of costs and ill intents Frostbite invents tossed-up, chill visions The fringes of my will locked in prisons Cold bars of half-eaten meals Old, hard memories of unspoken deals Steel in my hooves is the only thing real I feel, beneath the Families' crushing heels I am the soul in the hearts of none, I am the pull to make knots undone Inkblots blackening up the bright sun I have duties but they're not the right one Someday I'll have to pay back interests I lay down my life, play for kismets I hate straying to alleyways; what is this That I'm staying nights to do "business" Your work is killin', and rakin' dirty mils in Is fine, I draw the line at berserkin' buildin's, I'm not gonna pump 'em full with lead, bite the bullets your damn self, 'cause I'm not merkin' children I'm thrown in with the fishes, weighted like a stone No friends are had when the whistles are blown, I wish I'd never tried to play to Capone And now I'm drowning on my own, here... alone ***CREDITS AND EXPLANATION*** Beat produced by Da Mane: http://www.youtube.com/user/ImDaManeMan Wood texture by Rifificz: http://rifificz.deviantart.com/art/Wood-Texture-4-195636689 Nothing special, just 24 bars over a beat.