Update: I got Lyra!

Look below for the time stamps to quick jump to each character! I sent the real auditions in VIA the email as explained, I just picked my best takes, edited out the bloopers and put it together. I'm putting this up for a critique really! So rip into those voices! Though please try to be constructive and not destructive... Explain what was wrong with what and try to give suggestions on how to fix it.

Voices:
Lyra: 0:39
Twilight: 2:00
Applejack: 3:12
Apple Bloom: 4:08
Fluttershy: 4:59
Rarity: 6:02
Sweetie Belle: 6:56
Scootaloo: 7:18
Pinkie Pie: 7:40
Sunset shimmer: 8:22
Granny Smith: 8:55
Diamond Tiara: 9:35
Silver Spoon: 9:53
Mrs. Cake: 10:15