“Hello everypony, Snogwritts here!
I recently just finished reading, “Language Barrier” by Aquaman and I have a lot of
thoughts about this fic.
So without further or do, let's get right to it.”
“Ok so let's start with the main character, Dinky hooves, Derpy's lovely little daughter.
“The fic starts off with a conversation during lunch, with her fellow friends Sunny
and Peachy.”
“Dinky recently heard a so called “Bad word” and it seems that Dinky is probably
the only filly who knows it, only to pass the knowledge to her friends.”
“You know, Fluttershy should’ve watched her mouth.
Or, so they say.”
“Is peeve really a bad word?
Because peeve, according to the dictionary, means to be irritated or annoyed.
Nothing foul about that.
You know what?
I’ll even prove to you by saying it in public.”
“What?
You thought I was joking?
Hah, watch and see”
“Peeve”
“See what did I tell you?”
“Peeve!
Peeve!
Peeve!”
“I’ll even say it again.
Peeve!”
“Oh…
Hehe… hi mom…”
“Eh..
The soap was disgusting!
And don’t even get me started on Ponyville’s fountain water!
I’m not doing that again”
“For a filly to know a word like that most likely will be passed on to the next.
But, hey, I don’t blame her, I am a colt myself and I can relate”
“I have to say though, I really adore this writer's style.
The figurative language here in this fic is tremendous.
It gives the story its uniqueness and made it more enjoyable to read it, so regards to
the author for that.”
“The beginning doesn’t take too long either, I see a lot of writers give a few paragraphs
on the beginning and if not done correctly, will result in the reader not getting engaged.
When somebody reads something make sure by the first few sentences the reader has a good
idea what the story is about, they’ll eventually read more.”
“The characters act differently from each other, something I enjoyed about this fic
as well.
Dinky acts a certain way while Sunny is the killjoy, and Peachy um..
Well..
That actually leads to a problem.”
“I kind of wish the author would go more in depth of the characters personalities.
Specifically, Peachy, she just seems to be left to the side of the other characters even
though she was playing a crucial role in the story.
Giving her some more dialog can help.”
“Overall this fic was excellent and I definitely enjoyed reading it.
I suggest the author to make some adjustments to make it better.”
“So I’m going to give this fanfic, four quills out of five”
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“Alright, that’s it for me, this is Snogwritts, signing out.”
Thanks for watching!