What? Melody isn't dead? What kind of dark magic is this?!?!

So, for those who don't know, or chat with me regularly, I have a very low opinion of my own rap. Apparently it's good stuff, but that's just going on what others have told me.
I feel that I've gotten to the point where my own self-criticism is holding my rap ability back, so I'm putting that behind me (to the best of my ability), and that led me to write my verse over Problem.
Initially, it was just going to be my one verse, but Blitz offered to help lengthen the track with a verse of his own, along with mixing the vocals AND remixing the track, so thank ya, bro, for assisting A LOT with this! ;)
Also, thanks to my dad for making the awesome title card!

Blitz's Channel:
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCVIESixlZdzQi1H39GvwGdA

The track is Problem by Ariana Grande ft. Iggy Azalea.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SoJ8s90NLc4


Here are lyrics. They are here if you want them.

Blitz:
(You’re) Another problem, cause you are not an option
if knockin me is your goal then you can drop like a opossum
And stoppin me? just forget it the last thing i need's a message
from the haters who need a lesson bout learnin on who to mess with

Rap is just stress relief and you losers best believe
That I am always #winning kinda like i was charlie sheen
I’m hardly gonna care if you think that you can stare
While I blare my music out simply cause i wanna share

That’s the essence of the show, you better begin to know
that the reason why I flow is so i can achieve my goal
Of gettin my name seen, and that’s why i’m banking
on these tracks with my friends that i’m constantly making

They see the real me, the side that puts in the work
Not the one who doesn’t care if anyone gets hurt
By all these bars that I write. Are you mad? Get in line.
I’ve got 99 problems and yours won’t be mine

Melody:
Mister the Illest is back on the lyricism
Spitting a quick succession of syllables, pure and simple
Getting silly with the rhythm, intensity stepping
Up from the last single, put it down, easy reppin' (uh!)

Melly, Melly, too in it to be here stressing
About where my self-confidence lacks and when I mess up
Like Twi in Lesson Zero, got issues to be addressed
To Princess Celestia, 'cause I need less--

Problems spinning around in my head often
Causing that incredible rhyme to stop crossing
That boundary from "bad" to "good" to "awesome"
Impossible, thinking I'm common is not an option

Stop a hater cold, applause and jaws gawk
When I take the stage, like Maud, I rock ya socks off
I'm not giving up this place that I fought to get
Through the critiques and improvement, the Melody's on again!


Enjoy!