THANK YOU FOR 1,000 VIEWS!!!!!

If you don't like it, tell me what's wrong. Thanks!
So this is my first (pony) song and the first one to make it to YouTube! Fantastic!
I just want to make it clear that this is my EIGHTH song and only my first PONY song. You can check out my other works on http://soundcloud.com/mayonnaise-banana/
Download: http://soundcloud.com/mayonnaise-banana/1000-1
Instrumental: http://soundcloud.com/mayonnaise-banana/1000-instrumental
Title art and Vocals: http://www.youtube.com/user/TheRobotButterfly
Lyrics: http://www.youtube.com/user/Streetbuskerlyricist
Made in FL Studio 10 DEMO. Enjoy!

Lyrics: In my night there is a beauty undefined and
Wonders you will never see, the sun will blind you
Yet you rest, you hide and fear my beauty and I
Don't see why I must continue with this duty

All my life I wanted nothing more than to be
Loved by everypony like my sister was but
Now I see that no one cares for beauty and I
Know what I must become and what I need to be

And now my sister will understand my anger
She will know that now the moon will never fall

I am the nightmare who finds you in the night
The essence of your deepest fear, your deepest fright
I will break you like you broke me once before
I will destroy the throne you all seem to adore

Now the night will last forever and the moonlight
Shines down from the sky so full so strong so bright
Darkness reigns, eternal day will never come
The power of the night cannot be overcome

Once you feared me once you hated me but now
I hope you're satisfied her reign is over now