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Hey, Text.

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Have any nightmares lately?

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Well I was going somewhere with that.

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And it had to do with the comic I was reviewing this episode.

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But since you like ruining my fun, cue "spoiler alert."

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If your greatest fear is hearing spoilers, then you are not going to like the following video.

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Because there are spoilers in it...that should have been obvious.

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Today I'll be reviewing the unnamed arc.

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No really, this arc doesn't have an official name.

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But everypony just refers to it as...

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"THE NIGHTMARE RARITY ARC"

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So for the rest of my reviews of this arc, I will refer to it as such.

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This comic is written by Heather Cuffer.

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"I've heard it both ways."

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To continue, art is by Amy Mebberson and its just odd at some points.

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Mostly just some stretching or warping of the ponies face or eye when in profile view.

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other than that, the art was fine.

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Show quality...I guess

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I mean, I can't draw to save my life.

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So I really don't know how difficult it is to drawn a pony

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or any other creature in the MLP universe.

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Though it was pointed out in the comments of my Twilight Sparkle Micro Series review

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That the derpy drawings could have been the fault of the colorist, not the original artist.

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But the colorist of this comic is different than that of the Micro series comic.

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So I'm not sure if that is a real good excuse.

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Whelp, onto the actual story!

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It opens with Twilight Sparkle running scared through the deserted streets of ponyville.

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But the cloud like panel edging is supposed to imply that it is a dream...

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Or a nightmare?

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It then jumps to the next morning and Twilight appears to not have slept very well.

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It is soon revealed that she is not alone.

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Rainbow, Rarity, Applejack, Fluttershy, and one can only assume Pinkie Pie, have been having bad dreams as well.

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And according to pinkie pie the only solution for bad dreams is: a sleepover at Sugarcube Corner.

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But that night the mane six all have bad dreams.

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Twilight dreams of disappointing Celestia.

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Applejack dreams of Sweet Apple Acres dying do to poor care.

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Fluttershy dreams of her furry friends running from her in fear.

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Rainbow dreams of not being able to fly.

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Pinkie Pie dreams of not finding a joke to make a crowd laugh.

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And Rarity dreams of being replaced by a ponified version of amble from "Gravity Falls."

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No, seriously it is a ponified version of Mabel from "Gravirty Falls."  I'm not joking.

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And then the sinister black smoke that was causing the dreams, abducts rarity!

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"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!"

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"Bastards!"

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So they contact Princess Celestia.

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Who shows up in record time and she has series pilot Luna with her.

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Luna tells them of the Nightmare Forces from the dark side of the moon

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that are responsible for her transformation into Nightmare moon.

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When the Elements of Harmony freed Luna from the Nightmare Forces they went back to the moon.

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And she thought that they were gone for good.

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But through some bullshit legend the Nightmare Forces have regained their strength.

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Then then targeted the mane 6 because that harness the Elements of Harmony

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and if the Nightmare Forces make a new Nightmare from one of them, the elements can no longer stop them.

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They also want to destroy Ponyville because fuck Ponyville.

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Its over rated anyways.

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So the remaining mane 6, Spike and Luna plan to head to the moon to rescue Rarity

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before its too late!

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Meanwhile, the Nightmare Forces are trying to break Rarity

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and convince her to let them posses her.

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Wait...they need permission?

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They're the Nightmare Forces.

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In my mind, they should be like a demon.

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Being able to FORCFULLY POSSES A HOST!

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Not ask permission like the angels in "Supernatural!"

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Seriously, that's just horrible characterization of something that is supposedly PURE EVIL!

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To Be Continued...

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And just when it was getting so interesting.

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I was almost on the edge of my seat with the excitement.

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NOT!

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(sigh) This comic gets a lousy 4.5 tacky saddlebags out of 10.

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It just wasn't good.

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Basically, if you're going to add to or alter the establish lore or a series it should not be something as big

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AS THE MAIN CONFLICT OF THE PILOT EPISDE!

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And not to mention the scapegoating ove every action done by Luna as Nightmare Moon.

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Instead of it being Luna's fault its now the Nightmare Forces fault.

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THEY made her do it.

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Luna was just a damsel in digress waiting for the next bearers of the Elements of Harmony to come and free her.

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it makes her whole character arc pointless.

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Its just not good story telling.

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But that's just My 2 Bits on the matter.

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Tell me yours in the comment section below.

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Or suggest a spoiler alert blurb for future reviews.

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And don't forget to like and subscribe.

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I'm Comic Sans,

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and I'll see you next time for "Nightmare Rarity" part 2.

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Hopefully it is better than this part, my hopes are not very high.

