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Happy belated Nightmare Night everypony.

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Its a good day on the moon...at least I...I think its day.

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Kind of hard to tell when your on the celestial body that typically tells you it's night.

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Calm down Text!

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I think I have a way back.

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I'm going to attempt to cast the chromakey spell without a surface to cast it on.

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In theory the same chaotic side effect should happen...sending us home.

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But I'm going to wait until the story takes the ponies back to earth.

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"OH COME ON!"

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(laughter) Cue "Spoiler Alert."

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(singing) Spoiling the "Nightmare Rarity Arc"

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(singing) My Little Pony Comic.

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(singing) You've been warned so if you still watch,

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(singing) You'll be spoiled soon!

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And at long last, we reach the final part of...

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"THE NIGHTMARE RARITY ARC!"

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NOW I CAN FINALLY REST MY ROYAL CANTERLOT VOICE!

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By now you should probably already know who the writer and artist are for this arc.

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So I'm gonna jump right into the story...I hope you don't mind

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This part picks up with Luna leaving the moon.

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And feeling kind of weak for letting herself flee away while the others are getting captured.

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She then returns to Ponyville and tells her sister what happened on the moon.

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Back on the moon, Twilight manages to find faith in friendship again.

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And then this happens...

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Its not really explained what exactly what's going on, but I get the feeling this is going to be used later on...

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Meanwhile, Spike uses the camo moon slugs to sneak away again.

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Which for some reason works a lot better than the last time he tried this.

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"Convenient"

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He actually manages to get to the ponies in the dudgeon and free them.

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Well, I mean with help from Pinkie Pie who somehow got the key in an earlier panel.

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They then use this newly discovered power of pure friendship on the guard to assist in their escape.

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Back in Ponyville, the battle is in full swing.

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and during the course of the battle Luna is struck down by Nightmare Rarity

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and so she throws herself a pity party.

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But with the kindness shown to her by the residents of Ponyville,

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completely messing with the "we are terrified of Nightmare moon" vibe from the beginning of "Luna Eclipsed"

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She is able to forgive herself for her past transgressions

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and congratulations, your series pilot Luna has evolved into authorial maned Luna.

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This would be where I'd show a fan animation relating to what I just said...

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"IF I HAD ONE!"

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Then the prodigal ponies return!

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Thus that is our cue to return to earth!

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Don't worry I got this...

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Come on, I can do this!

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Come on, just focus the magic...onto the space directly behind me

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Doesn't have to be a surface there...just project it...COME ON!

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AHHH!

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Comic: Uhg, ouch! Who are you?

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Unknown pony: Name's Jet, Jet Fever.

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Comic: Ok, where did you come from?

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Jet: You see when a goat and a bat love each other very much...

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Comic: Dear Celestia! No! I mean, why did you tackle me?

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Jet: I've been on the moon for literally tens of sevens of minutes and I just wanted to leave.

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Jet: So I traced the magic signature from your wall back to you.

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Comic: Can Demon Ponies even do that?

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Jet: I dunno, but I did.

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Jet: I can do whatever the fuck I feel like.  See watch, I'm your script editor now.  DEAL WITH IT!

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Comic: OK...

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Comic: huh, guess i'm gonna need a new wall...

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Jet: Ya know I'mma do you a solid.

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Jet: as thanks for unwittingly freeing this dark magic, tartarus spawn from his banishment to the moon

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Jet: I'mma build you a bad ass mother fucking wall.  It's gonna have laser beams and shit.  Bitches love laser beams.

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Comic: (awkward laughter) its good to be home.

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But I should really get back to the review.

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And then the re-mane 5...and Spike, manage to use  the power of pure friendship

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to break the hold the Nightmare Forces have on Rarity.

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Returning her to her marshmallow colored, fashionable self.

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So luna parts ways with the reunited mane 6, Spike and Celestia to tend to her moon dwelling subjects.

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The End.

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I would give this comic, 5 moon castle dungeon keys out of 10.

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It was actually paced very well.

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I mean, the battle was actually a reasonable length.

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The only major issue I had with it was how they resolved it.

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It wasn't exactly a Deus Ex Machina, because they showed it being discovered,

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They showed that it could be used to turn an evil person back to good,

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But it just didn't make sense.

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I mean, if they're gonna pull an ending out of their ass

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They might as well've used the Elements of Harmony

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Sure that would mean a few extra panels showing them putting on the Elements of Harmony

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Maybe forcing the Element of Generosity onto Nightmare Rarity

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And the use the power of friendship to break the Nightmare Forces hold.

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That way on some level it was grounded in the shows actual lore.

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not some bullshit.

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Because if all you needed was really strong friendship to break the hold the Nightmare forces has on somepony.

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Why did Celestia have to banish her sister to the moon in the first place?

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What? Were they just not close friends back then?

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Like I said, it makes no sense.

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As a whole this arc scored a 35%.

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That technically doesn't even place anywhere on the grading that I use.

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But pretty much, that's an F.

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The sad fact is in order to stretch the story across 4 comics

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the author had to resort to needless and sometimes repeated plot points.

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Personally, I liked this arcs premise more than the previous arcs premise

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But that being said, I wouldn't reread this arc.

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This arc may have gotten a better overall grade if

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parts 2 and 3 were combined into 1 part

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Or if part 2 was part of part 1 and part 3 was part of part 4.

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Also the villains in this arc, the Nightmare Forces, were not menacing in the slightest.

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And their goal was very weak

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All they wanted was what Luna promised them long ago: Endless Night...

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and a kingdom of darkness to rule over as their own.

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Which, sure that made sense when they had a super charged, evil, Alicorn under their control.

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But...Nightmare Rarity is just a super charged, evil unicorn

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I think 2 Alicorns can easily take care of that

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King Sombra's plan had a better chances of succeeding.

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King Sombra was 10 times more menacing!

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You know there is a problem in your creative process if you create a villain who is worse than worst villain.

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Not to mention the numerous continuity errors

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that conflict with events that happened before this comic and events will happen after this comic in the timeline of the series.

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But as always, that is just My 2 Bits on the matter.

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Tell me what you thought of this comic or the arc as a whole in the comments below.

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You can also suggest a possible future "spoiler alert."

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Comic: Anyways, I'm Comic Sans

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Jet: Don't forget me, I'm Jet Fever

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and I'll see you next time for the review of the Rarity Micro Series titled "How Rarity Got her Groovey Back."

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Because there hasn't been enough Rarity in the past 4 reviews.

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Comic: OUCH!

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Comic: I thought you were joking about the lasers!

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Jet: I never joke about lasers.

