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So, I finally finished a project I've had shelved for a while now, and made a Rarity song (is my first dedicated to the marshmellowey pwny). It took roughly six hours altogether, and is also my first time using a vocoder-voice combo~

I'd love to get some feedback n' stuff, if at all possible, how to improve it etc. etc.

Thanks!!

DL: https://soundcloud.com/bronymastermind17/raindrops

FB: https://www.facebook.com/DEFPwny?ref=tn_tnmn

Lyrics:
We took a chance, we let it burn
The last place I had left to turn
But when the rain came, you turned your back to me...
To me...

Now let the raindrops pour down, on me
Half past heart down, plain to see
Now let the pieces fall like snow
And I don't want to, come back home

Rarity, can't you see?
All these things you, mean to me
Please don't go, please don't run
If you're not here, I'll come undone...

Now let the raindrops pour down, on me
Half past heart down, plain to see
Let the pieces, fall like snow
And I don't want to, come back home

My bed is cold, my tears are warm
I can't say that I'll, survive the storm
But I don't want to, sleep alone
So don't turn my heart into stone....

(Choir Singing)

We took a chance... We let it burn...
The last place I had left to turn....
And when the rain came, you held your hooves out to me....
To me.....


Thanks for listening! Have a hoof! /]