Alright, so i already know some obvious ones,
1: Bassline clashes with the song

I kind of wanted something raw in this song but seeing how much it sort of muds everything, i may just use something else but that is for you to decide.

2: The lead is too mixed in with everything.

I know. Do you think increasing the high frequencies on that would help and lowering the arp (or maybe even the sidechained pad)?

3: The middle part with all the crazy shit is waaay too distorted

THAT IS THE POINT! I wanted to make something similar to someones mind being corrupted since this song is related to a certain scene where that happens.

4: The inferno?

That is for you to decide. I wanted to have some sort of guitar in it but i don't know how (some of the things in this song were inspired by some of my dads music that he listens to). Shall i just make the last part with just the guitar, try to get both sounds in, or just remove it altogether?

List anything else i should fix in the comments or in the status. I will use this information later on when i get close to finishing the story.